User talk:TDisneyC

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Wilmington
What an enormous improvement you have made to the Wilmington High page- a page I watch with a degree of professional interest. Please feel free to contact me at any time, for advice or support. The first criticism you will receive is that it is short of wiki-links and written like an Ofsted statement not in encyclopedic mode. This first can be headed of by adding a some targetted , and the second can be pre-empted by a copy edit - removing give aways like  "offers a broad and balanced curriculum that develops the skills and attribute... " Even doing an attributed quote can cause problems, and anything taken from a primary source document- does need to be heavily rewritten.

Doing these things is never as easy as it looks- but you have made a fantastic start. Wilmington is a classic example of a Kent Secondary Modern- / High School /Academy and as such Wikipedia needs to build it up to GA status as a model- so it is really worth the effort.

You can meetup with us at Meetup/London/123 etc - it makes a change from the classroom. ClemRutter (talk) 10:15, 4 October 2017 (UTC)