User talk:THM20/draftarticle

Excellent work THM20. You have substantially improved the original article and significantly addressed the key weakness of the article in terms of its USA centric information by adding material from/about Australia, the UK and France. You might have addressed the identified weakness more by also perhaps checking out Chinese ballet, which has had some outstanding male dancers. Are Chinese cultural attitudes similar? also Japan. Or Russia, where male dancers have excelled for long. Are these countries similarly masculinist about men in ballet? There are also some links missing to other parts of wikipedia (eg. Fairchild dances with the NY Ballet and you could link to his name in the wikipedia page of NYBallet). I strongly urge you to edit the actual article by cutting and pasting your work into it and pressing the publish button! If you need some support to do t his, please don't hesitate to email me. Do let me know if you go ahead and publish. Pru Mitchell from the Australian Wikipedia will advise and help on this if we need her. JaneHaggis 04:57, 15 November 2019 (UTC)