User talk:TLHami26/Hoxnian Stage

It's not clear what you've added to this section v.s. the entry already on Wiki. Where are your additions to the entry? Where are your citations?

Reviewed your page good job on the neutral sounding I would just like to add that maybe you want to add a little bit more detail for the middle sections. other than that good jobJargu006 (talk) 04:50, 13 May 2020 (UTC)

Reviewed your page, I agree with the feedback above, definitely add more into the middle sections and try to be more clear on the information just on Hoxnian Stage because you have a lot or related topics but not much on the actual one. (User slyon008 9:50, 13 May 2020) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Slyon008 (talk • contribs)