User talk:TM-307/Evaluate an Article

I will be adding this comment as a trial run for my evaluation statement.-TM-307 (talk) 03:25, 5 March 2024 (UTC)

Evaluation
Most major issues present in the Contestado War article are readily apparent, when analyzed. Perhaps most obvious, and as pointed out at the top their are exceedingly few inline citations in this article, and could do with additional sources to draw on for the article. While the introductory section, largely seems sufficient in its writing and contents, yet another issue mentioned above is how large chunks of the body sections of the page reads like an essay in many places and the writing needs to be tweaked more to be a more neutral accounting of the situation. Grammar mistakes are also present as mentioned on the talk page. However, while these issues are indeed present, there seems to be a solid base present to rewrite and polish, no major omissions of info seem apparent to me as of yet, and I think the bones of a good article present. TM-307 (talk) 04:01, 6 March 2024 (UTC)