User talk:TNtoMI2023/Chickamauga Cherokee/Forest Trinket Peer Review

I am reviewing the work of user TNtoMI2023 on their article revision for "Chickamauga Cherokee". The revisions added were to the lead section. These revisions added a more neutral tone with a couple sentences cited and the others were wording changes. I was unable to access the link that is cited but it looks like it is a biography and autobiography from a reliable source published in 1986. I was surprised to see only one reference used and the original article has multiple sections that are missing citations but I believe you are planning to find more reliable sources to add cites to some of these. For example the sections "Five Lower Towns", "Aftermath of the wars"( which the W in wars could be capitalized along with other section titles), "Tecumseh's return" are especially short compared to other sections, so finding sources on those would really benefit the article and make it more balanced. I'm not sure if the source that is already cited would have any information to add into any section but I think that could be a good place to start. Overall I think the revisions made are neutral and benefit the original article. I really enjoy the wording changes that were made, I didn't think to do that in my own article revision. I believe you are already planning to add more citations and make minor changes that will further more benefit the article. I personally would not delete the letter by President Jefferson but instead add it to a different section if it fits or if you're able to find enough relevant information to make it into it's own section. Forest Trinket (talk) 02:17, 28 April 2024 (UTC)