User talk:TPat25/LGBT Youth Vulnerability

Just be sure to add citations and discuss the issues in a bit more detail! Possibly add preventative measures Sierra.french (talk) 23:03, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

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Nice draft, TPat25. You offer some really substantive suggestions and I would encourage you to consider drafting the sections themselves for submission--though that is not required. One suggestion is that the subsections be titled by institutional forces that affect youth--families, schools, prisons, health care, etc. You might looks at the Transgender youthTransgender Youth article for some structural ideas, though it is only C-class. I was most surprised to not see families as a core piece of the article given their role in the difference between a healthy coming of age or not. You are well on your way to finished. Be sure to edit for concise language, spelling and such. --Jbdolphin (talk) 05:11, 12 May 2021 (UTC)