User talk:TR1920A

Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia. While objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you. Mean as custard (talk) 12:17, 8 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hello Mean as custard,
 * I updated this article as per other entrepreneurs example in Wikipedia. There is an introduction, there is personal live, business history, and all of that supported with articles from many different media. I didn't wanted to have bias and use only company information. As you may see it vary from local to regional and international articles that support what I updated. I referred to Elon Must article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elon_Musk
 * Can you be more specific what do you mean with advertising? I don't get it. If you refer to mentioning company names I believe they are facts. There is no call for action to support or any kind of action. Please let me know because maybe I miss something.
 * thanks TR1920A (talk) 12:29, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
 * There are too many promotional phrases like "Samir Mane pursued his dream", "marking the beginning of an unparalleled success story", "Samir Mane is at the same time a distinguished philanthropist", "whose dedication and passion remain key to our success story", "vision, innovative ideas and entrepreneurship charisma". Also, see WP:EL for guidance on external links. . .Mean as custard (talk) 10:45, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Got you! I thought it has something to do with the content because I used Elion Musk structure. Give me 1 week and I will reword based on your suggestions. thank you! TR1920A (talk) 15:42, 9 April 2024 (UTC)