User talk:TRees68/sandbox

Really like the headers and the sections which really make the piece organized as well as the good citation sources. I would rephrase the first sentence of the Careers and Achievements section. I would add more information to the area you last left off noted in the sandbox. I also liked how you turned the dates into sentences. This sandbox also has all five elements mentioned for a good Wikipedia article. Overall, well done. Jacobpurint (talk) 23:31, 12 March 2020 (UTC)