User talk:TWKOTB

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Congratulations on getting some edits posted TWKOTB. While your grammatical edits are correct, many of them represent lateral changes (like "thus" to "hence") and so forth--try to correct some more substantial structural errors. Your paragraph submissions in your sandbox look good. However, the Exxon paragraph needs more specifics. Can you incorporate some tangible examples?Mcwabaunsee 21:23, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

TWKOTB, YOU NEED TO POST YOUR EDITS! Mcwabaunsee 01:30, 16 November 2007 (UTC)

Your Exxon environmental section needs to be balanced. The purpose of the encyclopedia is to provide information outside of the corporation's official statements. Mcwabaunsee 01:33, 16 November 2007 (UTC)