User talk:TWloveandhonor/sandbox

Enuma Elish
User:TWloveandhonor, good basic idea. But when I go to the Tiamat page, my search shows that Marduk is mentioned 9 times. Nonetheless, perhaps there is something there (or a related article) that can be added?

Let me know how it goes, ProfGray (talk) 02:52, 11 February 2015 (UTC)

User talk:TWloveandhonor read my previous comment on your user page. Hope this helps. Adrugby (talk) 20:19, 11 February 2015 (UTC)

Wife-sister
Could you be more specific in describing the evidence or reasoning he uses to dispute a given (specific) source hypothesis?

As it stands now, the paraphrases seems too general to merit inclusion, doesn't it? ProfGray (talk) 03:05, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

Mendenhall
Outline is good start, but not sure it shows his overarching point and how he gets there. (Hope you feel better…) ProfGray (talk) 03:44, 4 March 2015 (UTC)

Covenant paragraphs
Very good. Neither paragraph mentions the scholar, so I'd think you'd need to include them. Also, would it make sense to indicate how these points matter to him? I'm a bit concerned that the Weinfield paragraph is focused on something tangential to him, and so it might seem imperfect to rely on him as the source. Let me know what you think. ProfGray (talk) 19:02, 9 March 2015 (UTC)

covenant paragraphs
This is great, but perhaps you could explain how exactly they reaped the benefits to help your point get across. I hope this is helpful.Adrugby (talk) 01:50, 18 March 2015 (UTC)