User talk:T Shrell/sandbox

Peer Review
1. I really enjoyed that you talked about Venezuela; I did not expect to hear that that area of the world was the power 'house of pageants' so it was an interesting fact for the audience. Additionally, I liked the touch of adding information about the beauty pageant schools- when I read this information I wanted to keep reading to learn more. Great job adding the topic of mental illnesses being developed as a result of being in beauty pageants!

2. I would probably specify that these are pageant prep schools in Venezuela as you will want to make it clear that they are not in the US/ Europe ect.

3. I think the most important thing you can do would be emphasizing the extreme normality and cultural aspect of sexualization of children in beauty pageants specific to Venezuela. Also, talk about training in pageant schools and the differences in coaching styles in the US!

4. I think I can add more interesting tid bits like you did!