User talk:Taghrid.ahd

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (February 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheSandDoctor was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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TheSandDoctor (talk) 22:14, 22 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your positive words of encouragement for this new user. I believe that the article creation flag was not on purpose. I instructed this editor to paste edit suggestions into the sandbox, so I could assist while the editor is learning Wikipedia formatting and editing. The next step will be to insert the sentences and citations into the relevant articles. Should we remove the above messages? Thanks again for your help!JenOttawa (talk) 02:55, 25 February 2018 (UTC)

Welcome to The Wikipedia Adventure!

 * Hi Taghrid.ahd! We're so happy you wanted to play to learn, as a friendly and fun way to get into our community and mission.  I think these links might be helpful to you as you get started.
 * The Wikipedia Adventure Start Page
 * The Wikipedia Adventure Lounge
 * The Teahouse new editor help space
 * Wikipedia Help pages

-- 23:21, Thursday, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

Copy and paste
You added

"the intramuscular route with 20 µg RV is significantly more effective compared with the intradermal route with 2 µg RV, as the standard schedule compared with a rapid schedule and deltoid intramuscular injection compared with the gluteal intramuscular injection"

Ref says

"The intramuscular route with 20 microg RV was significantly more effective compared with the intradermal route with 2 microg RV as was the standard schedule compared with a rapid schedule and deltoid intramuscular injection compared with the gluteal intramuscular injection"

Cochrane reviews are copyrighted. We CANNOT copy and paste from them unfortunately. Please make sure you paraphrase going forwards. Also if you are interested in helping with translation we would love that aswell :-) Best Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 13:33, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the note, and my apologies for this incovinience. Regarding translation, I am interested. What do you recommend as a start? Regards, Taghrid.ahd (talk) 18:47, 2 March 2018 (UTC)