User talk:Takia02/Bayou Road

I did a peer review for you. I hope that is helpful to you even though I didn't really have any recommendations just praisesRaegannicoleee (talk) 17:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)Raegan

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This is some really nice work. Among other things, I like the structure you've created for the article; that has a very nice logical flow to it.

I would suggest focusing on expanding the existing sections to make for a fuller article. You don't ever want to have a single-sentence paragraph, and right now the descriptions of the neighborhoods aren't always even complete sentences. Consider also offering an introductory paragraph to each major section, such as the "District Connections" (I might just call this "Neighborhoods") and the "Places to Visit" (I might call this "Landmarks & Attractions"). Similarly, you don't want a table without some text explaining it.

Very impressive research. Keep up the good work.

jtodd1973 21:39, 6 March 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jtodd1973 (talk • contribs)