User talk:Taliasaravi/sandbox

TA Comments:

In-text citations: yes

Professional tone: yes

Paraphrasing real science: There are some passing mentions to Lubitz’s scientific undertakings but no in depth discussion.

Grammar and spelling: overall good

Links to other wiki articles: none

Score: 16/20

Peer Review:

Peer Review from Jacobtsai0

Overall the structure and content of this page is very clear and straightforward. However, there may be more clarification needed as to where Lubitz pursued his doctoral degree in physics. There could also possibly be more details added to describe the project that Lubitz worked on and the research that he conducted. Otherwise, the timeline of his education and career are easily understood and well organized. Good job!

TSAI, JACOB Peer Review Score: 20/20