User talk:TallGuy117/sandbox

Tamara's Peer Review

You have included interesting information about turtle mating behaviour in your article that I think would make a great addition to Wikipedia! Since you only have one paragraph for your article, maybe you could separate the paragraph into specific sections and a lead that includes the most important information about the subject. A possible section could include "Courting strategies of males turtles" since you have provided substantial information on this topic. You could even divide this section into different species (aquatic vs. terrestrial), etc. Your article is well written in an informative, neutral tone and you have backed up many of your sentences with references that seem reliable. However, you may want to provide a few more references after sentences that do not have citations to support them such as: "Females generally outnumber males in various turtle species and as such males must develop different courting strategies or use other methods to gain access to a potential mate. One such method is the size of the male which can help give it an advantage over competing males."

Overall, great job and good luck! (Tcs366 (talk) 20:34, 7 November 2018 (UTC))