User talk:Tallcuss

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Saturday 12 Oct
Hello Margaret

I discovered "Seatalk" was previously Wikipedia article but deleted.

So looking for articles to edit settled on Raymarine Marine Electronics.

Article began in 2006, been through 50+ edits, been up for deletion and still considered "weak".

Article has only 1 cite but several references under "Bibliography". Should these not be cites? Also 5 of 7 links in Bibliography are no longer available. How can I fix, mark as broken or remove?

Sunday 13 Oct
Hello Margaret

Made first edit of Raymarine Marine Electronics. Yea!!! Please check it out. Comments much appreciated. Do you think I did too much for one go? Tallcuss (talk) 01:06, 13 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi Very much liked your additions.  However, I don't think dead-links should be removed.  They usually provide a hint for how to find them again, or a hint for finding a supporting source.  They are often necessary to justify the text. They are annoying, but.....  (I haven't yet checked out your Afd. I will now take a look.) MargaretRDonald (talk) 20:17, 13 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . Now I understand. PS I think your history was a considerable improvement. Cheers, MargaretRDonald (talk) 20:26, 13 October 2019 (UTC)
 * "Raymarine has a global service network that operates in over 80 countries all over the world". I think this sentence could be expanded to indicate what the services provided are (perhaps also indicate some of the countries) and finally it needs a reference. Cheers, MargaretRDonald (talk) 20:31, 13 October 2019 (UTC)

Raymarine
Is looking good. Thanks for finally publishing. (The paradigm is quite different from writing something for your boss.) MargaretRDonald (talk) 14:27, 25 October 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ronald William John Keay (February 3)
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GorillaWarfare (talk) 00:15, 3 February 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ronald William John Keay has been accepted
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