User talk:Tamasine22/jamie beddard

This is a really good start. Good referencing, nice prose. So rather than interfere here are a few pointers.

Other tasks

 * Adjectives- leave it to the user to assess where something is 'aweinspiring', ǵroundbreaking or prestigeous. Wikipedia calls them peacock words- WP:PEACOCK and you can safely zap them.


 * Tables are dated from first to last- NOT last to first. That is for consistency across WP.


 * Don't leave raw website addresses in the text- wrap them into a reference. I have done one for you.

Soon someone will place a tag at the top of this page and it will be assessed and transferred to the main article.