User talk:Tammy083/sandbox

Peer review''' Hi Tammy, I think you have some good information such as the Rashad family and its two similar dialects. I think the structure of tour lead section is clear. However, I think you could include more details about the language itself, such as the grammar structure and the phonology (if it is possible). The tone is natural and those sources are reliable. I just think besides the Rashad family, it would be better to include the structure of the Tegali language. Catherinezeng (talk) 16:46, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review
'''I know this is a hard thing to do! Believe me I find it frustrating sometimes but you're doing a great job!! Good luck!'''
 * instead of stating "Ethnologue states" maybe simply paraphrase what it is you are trying to say and cite the work itself
 * "There are 35,700 native speakers in the Janub Kurdufan state, Sudan. ---maybe I'm reading it wrong but I thought it didn't sound right maybe add "the"
 * Instead of stating Greenberg (1963) simply paraphrase and cite at the end
 * Your "Schodeberg" reference in the bibliography doesn't have a link, or potential way to access it
 * Tucker & Bryan, as well as Welmers has no citation within the lead section
 * make it sound more encyclopedic, I agree with Catherine wrote, maybe try to include information about the language itself; like the things you will be sharing of the dialect, grammar etc

Marianelaq17 (talk) 20:00, 30 March 2017 (UTC)Marianela Quezada