User talk:Tanamoody/sandbox

This article is really strong! It's clear that you have done some extensive research on this woman and that you care about bringing her story to the world. I think including the box at the top with her general information was a nice touch as well, it makes her a little more accessible for us.

Your information in the Biography section is really thorough, but I think it needs more citations. After each fact, you can attach a citation so that people know where you got that exact information. It's a little confusing, but I think to be more reliable you should probably add in those citations.

I didn't find any major grammatical issues, but there is one typo in your Biography section where the word "was" is written half in normal type and half in italics, so you may want to fix that.

Great work so far! -Caroline