User talk:Tanguangyao88

Welcome!
Hello, Tanguangyao88, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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moving your work back to the sandbox
Hi Tanguangyao88, I moved your work back to your sandbox as it has several critical issues that should be addressed first.
 * Citations are not added correctly. To review how to do this correctly, please review our training on adding citations
 * This is not coming across as an encyclopedia article, but rather as your notes on what you would write if you were to tackle this subject
 * For example, I will use this article as the way to illustrating the individual case when the demolition events happen to the evictees. In detail, I will use the examples of individual cases that happened in the small towns of China to reveal the situations. Wikipedia articles are written in the third person (pronouns such as "I", "we", and "us" are almost never used). There are several more examples of this.
 * This needs quite a bit of copyediting for grammar. Sentences such as Evictees, who sticky in emotion about ancestor could be another reason leads protest with the government's official are unclear in meaning. There are many other grammar errors that make this difficult to read and the article comes across as unpolished.

Let me know if you have any questions for me. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:03, 29 March 2019 (UTC)