User talk:Tanmanjf/sandbox

Feedback on 2nd draft
Michelev (talk) 21:39, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Remove internal link from Lifeboat Davit types heading. Since there are no other types listed, I suggest keeping heading as is, just Types.
 * A few coding errors for inline references.
 * One or more of the labeled photos could be embedded in the article near the text that refers to parts.
 * Some of the technical terms further down in the article would benefit from an internal link.