User talk:Tansyl

Aberdeen Floating Village
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aberdeen_floating_village

Comment 1: Some cited sources for the history of Aberdeen Floating Village are online articles and tourist handbooks. These sources can be useful and might be correct, but not as plausible as books/journals that specifically write about Hong Kong history. Below is a government historical journal for the history before 1969, as an example of a better source. http://www.worldcat.org/title/hong-kong/oclc/18695941 Also, for a better overall organization, the section "Fishing industry in Aberdeen" should be placed under "History of boat people in Hong Kong" after "Background". "The Aberdeen Dragon Boat Race" should be moved under "Lifestyle" since it is an annual event.

Comment 2: Some regionally well-known development schemes that have significant impacts on the tourism of Aberdeen are not included in the content, such as the Aberdeen Tourism Project and MTR South Island Line Development (including the construction of Aberdeen MTR Station).

Tansyl (talk) 22:50, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

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