User talk:Tarapark96/sandbox

Article Review - Makenzie Smokstad
So far, so good! I think adding in what inspired her to write creative and feminist themed novels is an awesome idea considering on the original page there isn't really a back story. The only thing I would be careful about would be your sourcing - I always go to the NY Times for any review I'm doing personally, but for Wiki I'm not sure if that's okay - I'll have to check the Source training. Be on the look out for an academic piece or journal written about the book OR a biography of her to tie from. Aside from the nit-picking, great job & best of luck! - Makenzie Smokstad (2/27/28) 10:39 A.M. Msmoksta (talk)

Tara's Peer Review
Going into Alderman's past as an advocate for women and feminism is good! But, how did she advocate for women? I feel like adding some possible examples would help to show what kind of person Alderman is and how that influences her work. Are there other interviews or sources that support this argument? I understand that discussing a person, especially one with relatively new commercial success can be difficult, but maybe adding a bit more can help round out who she is. Kennedke (talk) 16:17, 28 February 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review for Tara
With the content being placed in the biography section, I think it is great that information regarding Alderman's viewpoints is included! For the first section, you could possibly go into more detail about why is was a common notion that feminism was at its peak and its battle won. By going into more detail, there could be a better tie between viewpoints of the past compared to viewpoints of today, especially those of Alderman. Also, I think the second section could go into more detail with how she advocates. While there is a page for Alderman's book, The Power, you could possibly give as an example of why that book is a response to Alderman's advocation for the women's movement. Overall, I think that you bring up great points, but the article could go further with a little bit more details. Scvalde (talk) 00:50, 1 March 2018 (UTC)