User talk:Tarekjam

December 2011
Hi. Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for working to improve the site with your edit to Amber Smith, as we really appreciate your participation. However, the edit had to be reverted, because the source you cited made no mention of that material. In addition, here are some friendly suggestions about your addition to the article that I hope will improve your future edits:


 * If sourced, the material should be placed in the proper section, which would be her Career, specifically the Modeling section, since it pertains to that activity.
 * The Modeling section, in fact, already mentions that she traveled to Paris after beginning modeling at a young age.
 * One line break between sections is sufficient. Three is unnecessary.
 * Care should be taken to make sure your additions exhibit the qualities of good writing, including coherent sentence structure. The sentence "The 15 year old was and soon flew to Paris....." should have been corrected for this. (I'm guessing you meant to say "The 15 year old soon flew to Paris...").

If you have any other questions about editing, or need help regarding the site's policies, just let me know by leaving a message for me in a new section at the bottom of my talk page. Thanks. :-) Nightscream (talk) 15:39, 13 December 2011 (UTC)