User talk:Tarheel95/August 2011

Make Up For Ever page
Hi Tarheel95

I made changes to the MUFE page, removing all references to specific products in hopes that it suffices. I had received comments in a live chat from another editor previously who suggested the changes the previous round, so I'm a little surprised it wasn't accepted. Can you give more specific criticism? All of the items in the article are factual, the company and personality behind it are established and worthy of note within the industry, and as I said I deleted the mention of specific product lines assuming that was the issue, though I thought it was worth mentioning. Thx! Wikicontrib11 (talk) 13:56, 29 August 2011 (UTC)Wikicontrib11
 * At the time, I did not accept the article because I did not believe it was written in Neutral Point of View. However, with the changes in the revised version, this article looks good enough to enter the mainspace. Tarheel95 (talk) 15:50, 30 August 2011 (UTC)