User talk:Taylor.leal

Article Evaluation
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Happy_Hippie_Foundation

Leaves out details about which organizations she significantly contributed too. Were they are also related to LGBTQ?

That would be a nice link to create in that paragraph

Link for my friends place, no longer working https://www.charitynavigator.org/index.cfm?bay=search.summary&orgid=11121

http://myfriendsplace.org/

Some of the stories about other people ere a bit distracting, like about Marlon Brando, and Leelah Alcorn.

Also the bit about the Dolly Foundation really seemed to have no connection at all besides the fact that that' her godmother, and she also has a charitable organization.

A lot of the main sourcing is from the organizations site itself, which could give bias information

The tone of the article doesn't skew in the direction of being based though which is good. Just stating the facts. Taylor.leal (talk) 06:08, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

Not all of the links work, the first one that didn't was the first one posted above. As well a majority of the links are to the organizations website. Would be nice to have to some more cross examining.

People in the talk page brought up going into more detail about the programs that they provide for their clients.

Other than that it seemed more like fans commending her, and wanting to bring up more facts about her philanthropy, other than more facts solely about The Hippie Foundation.

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