User talk:Taylor.s.cummings

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Hello, Taylor.s.cummings, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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You have an overdue training assignment.
Please complete the assigned training modules. --Ecs222 (talk) 14:55, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Peer review
I think the "Sexual and Domestic Violence" section that you added was definitely important and impactful to the overall article - it seems like you spent a fair amount of time researching information and coming up with a really great article! I also like the section about the Survived and Punished organization that was added, and it seems like all your claims and information have sources to back it up. To the bare eye it seems like a lot of words in dense paragraphs, so maybe more spacing would be beneficial, or adding a picture or two to break up the sections. It also seems like a trend in other Wikipedia articles to start off the intro section with the definition so it is easier to find, so that would be a suggestion I have. Otherwise the article looks really great!! Emilyg31 (talk) 01:08, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Peer review response: Thanks for your feedback! I am going to try to add more images and see if I can break up the information a bit more based on your feedback. I am also going to try to add a definition to the intro. I think that would be good to help introduce the topic.-Taylor