User talk:Taylor Hays/sandbox

=Thays Contribution: Classroom ==

Reading this portion of the article, I noticed several sentences were opinion based. I changed these sentences to the best of my ability to make them into plain statements. There was information in the paragraph that I noticed was not cited, so I researched the info and updated the sentence and cited the information I found. I also noticed the word 'acuity' was not hyperlinked to the website in which the information of the definition came from. I searched for the definition in my source and hyperlinked the word to give it credit. Taylor Hays (talk) 02:18, 19 October 2018 (UTC)