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AfC notification: Draft:Michel A. Khalaf has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Michel A. Khalaf. Thanks! Greenman (talk) 22:24, 2 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi, @Greenman! Thank you so much for the quick response. I have started a new thread on the associated Talk Page for the draft. I am unsure how to respond to your comment directly in the draft, so I hope the Talk Page was the correct place instead.
 * In the event that you cannot find it, here is a copy of my response:
 * Thanks for leaving your comment on my draft submission. We used this Chief Executive article as the source for the birth year mentioned in the info box. We did this by using the age mentioned in the article (55 years old), viewing the publish date of the article in the meta data (2019), and subtracting from there.
 * We have searched public records for additional third-party sourcing to confirm this information beyond knowledge as a COI representative from MetLife, but we are happy to look further if preferred.
 * Thank you again and we look forward to hearing from you soon. TayloratML (talk) 17:16, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Michel A. Khalaf (November 6)
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WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 18:26, 6 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Hello @WikiOriginal-9! Thank you for reviewing the Michel A. Khalaf article draft! I saw that you said the draft was close to approval, but not quite there. Can you please provide some guidance on what would get the draft across the finish line for approval?
 * To give context from my point of view, Michel A. Khalaf is a Fortune 100 CEO frequently mentioned in the news. Here are some other reputable publications that mention him that I didn’t use as sources. Would any of the following help supplement the article?
 * https://finance.yahoo.com/news/metlife-ceo-michel-khalaf-cfo-201500162.html
 * https://www.foxbusiness.com/business-leaders/metlife-names-khalaf-ceo-kandarian-to-retire
 * https://finance.yahoo.com/news/metlife-announces-leadership-changes-cio-130000055.html
 * https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2023-08-02/metlife-profits-dip-as-company-prepares-for-reinsurance-deal?embedded-checkout=true
 * https://www.thehindubusinessline.com/money-and-banking/india-among-the-most-attractive-secular-growth-markets-for-metlife-visiting-global-ceo-michel-khalaf/article66386457.ece
 * https://finance.yahoo.com/news/metlife-foundation-reaches-milestone-over-153000819.html
 * https://www.wsj.com/market-data/quotes/MET/company-people/executive-profile/55457484
 * https://www.bloomberg.com/profile/person/17474621#xj4y7vxkg
 * https://finance.yahoo.com/news/metlife-inc-nyse-met-q3-174128314.html
 * https://www.thinkadvisor.com/2021/11/05/metlife-has-paid-2-1b-in-u-s-covid-19-death-claims/
 * https://www.reuters.com/business/finance/metlife-profit-drops-lower-adjusted-premiums-2023-05-03/
 * Thank you for any clarification you can provide me. I look forward to hearing back from you!   TayloratML (talk) 21:01, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

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I took a look at all of the sources listed above and unfortunately they do not contribute much more to his notability. Most of the sources are just passing mentions. We need more independent sources discussing him in depth. The interviews are okay but don't grant that much towards notability because interviews are not considered fully indepedent. However, I have re-sumbitted the article for a second opinion. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 21:08, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Michel A. Khalaf has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Michel A. Khalaf. Thanks! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 21:09, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Michel A. Khalaf (November 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ARandomName123 was:

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ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 22:57, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Michel A. Khalaf


Hello, TayloratML. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Michel A. Khalaf".

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗ plicit  00:05, 25 May 2024 (UTC)