User talk:Taylorjharper/sandbox

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I am quite curious to read your final article. Right now, you don't really have a draft, but a precursor to a draft. You'll need to compose the actual text you want to add to WP so that you can get good feedback before you upload information to the WP mainspace.JAirhart 21:05, 12 March 2019 (UTC)

The information that is in your draft is no doubt credible from my understanding of the topic, but maybe try to explain "Netflix And Chill" for the generation of people that have no clue what it is. Maybe also mention the memes and jokes that were made by celebrities or film and tv. If included, the references could add more sources to your article. (Peer Review By Caden Coleman) Colemancaden (talk) 15:27, 13 March 2019 (UTC)

Taylor, your revised draft does include more information that can be added to WP, but it will need citations that refer directly to your sources before you upload to the mainspace. JAirhart 15:48, 13 March 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Airhartcomp (talk • contribs)