User talk:Taylorpease/sandbox

peer review
all your ideas are good, you just need to start writing them. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Katierstice (talk • contribs) 14:35, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for your comments about my article! Taylorpease (talk) 13:39, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

Article evaluation
This is my article evaluation. Taylorpease (talk) 02:29, 13 February 2018 (UTC)

Cyberbullying OUTLINE
I am going to improve and edit the article that talks about cyberbullying. Taylorpease (talk) 15:17, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

'Cyberbullying' is the use of technology to bully a person, or threatening an individual online. Cyberbullying has become more common nowadays because of all the technology that children have access to. The most common apps that teenagers use to cyberbully are Instagram, Twitter, and Snapchat. Cyberbullying has become harder to stop because parents and teachers are unaware of when and where it is happening. Online bullying has become a bigger problem and 33% of all youth has been a victim of cyberbullying. Teens will say awful things to one another online and what they do not realize is that once it is said and published online it will not go away. Home used to be a safe place for teens but now a child is still within reach of becoming a victim of cyberbullying- whether it is through YouTube, Ask.fm, or a text message.

Preventing a child from being cyberbullied is hard, but now they are working to form laws to help stop the issue from getting worse than it already is. They have created movies such as 'Cyberbully' by Charles Biname and 'The Duff' by Ari Sandel for teenagers to watch and see how cyberbullying can affect an individual. Parents can become more involved in their children's lives when it comes to social media to help prevent their child from being bullied. Children that are victims of this problem feel they can not go to an adult for help because they may feel embarrassed by the situation. Bullying online will not only hurt the teenager emotionally but there is also a risk of the child hurting themselves physically as well. Suicide has become the 3rd leading cause of death among persons from 10 to 24 years of age and online bullying takes a big part in that.

Being able to tell if a child is being hurt from this issue can be tough, but there are certain things that a child will do that should give a red flag that they are being bullied. Such as if they post a video or a picture on Instagram with comments like "Am I ugly? Someone said I was but is it true?" or "Am I cute?". A cyberbully could have said nasty words to that child and the victim could be looking for compliments. If the victim is always online wondering when the bully will strike next that could also be a sign. Being an active parent in their children's lives will make a difference on whether your child is experiencing online bullying or not. Also bringing police involved in the case will be a problem solver too.

https://www.dove.com/uk/dove-self-esteem-project/help-for-parents/teasing-and-bullying/how-to-stop-cyberbullying-and-protect-your-child.html

https://www.stopbullying.gov/cyberbullying/what-is-it/index.html

http://kidshealth.org/en/parents/cyberbullying.html

Taylorpease (talk) 13:49, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
a couple helpful hints that could improve your draft would be find where there are context gaps in the article and find a reliable source that can help fill the gap, and to find sources to cite information that may not be cited yet. otherwise it sounds great. Kamryngood (talk) 14:25, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback! Taylorpease (talk) 13:39, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

rough draft peer review
Try to expand on how people may be cyberbullying others and find more places in the article where there is missing information and add there.Brian.klein (talk) 14:29, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the helpful tips! Taylorpease (talk) 13:36, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

Article Draft
Taylor, I like that you begin with a definition of cyberbullying--is it missing from the current WP page? I'm concerned that your sources are all online sources and that none come from the databases--those would be more trustworthy and more likely to be unbiased. I like using a specific example in your draft, but I wonder what makes this particular example special. Examples you use should be representative of all cases and should help describe your topic in some fundamental way.JAirhart 19:43, 25 March 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Airhartcomp (talk • contribs)

Thank you for the good feedback. I will go back through and try to find more trustworthy sources for my article! Taylorpease (talk) 13:42, 29 March 2018 (UTC)