User talk:Tazzur/sandbox

Hi there. I would just suggest that you don't have to add the title "Introduction", as it's obvious what your first paragraph is. Totesgreen (talk) 00:27, 15 February 2013 (UTC)Totesgreen

I suggest you have quotations or bold or italize the title throughout the page consistently so it is easy to notice when you are talking about the short story. Nessyb (talk) 05:15, 15 February 2013 (UTC)

Hello! I would suggest making a Reflist for direct links to your sources. I started one with your summary. Great page though good work! TeamVoldemort (talk) 18:12, 15 February 2013 (UTC)