User talk:Tblynch20

A couple of peer review points:


 * First off, you begin your article with what seems to be an essay hook: "When talking about early cinema it is tough not to mention D.W. Griffith and his numerous films... " This is an opinionated statement. Remember, this is supposed to be similar to an encyclopedic article.


 * You need to utilize paragraphs. Your content is good, but it needs some serious re-formatting. A singular block paragraph most likely will not fly.


 * Photographs might be useful and provide a nice curated look. Spice it up.


 * Much editing needed, especially grammatical and comma use.

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