User talk:Tbronson16/sandbox

I like that there is added information added about her personal life because there wasn't too much information about it on the wiki page online. There is roughly equal amounts of information on her childhood and education and her career on the wiki page, so I would make sure to add things not already listed (not that you did, just something too be aware of) and would try to make sure to add important information since there's a lot already there. There is hardly any information on her wiki page for her honors and awards so it would be a good subject to look into finding if she has more to try and balance out the page. Cnpollard (talk) 19:34, 27 February 2020 (UTC)

I think you did a great job adding on to the information already in the article, as stated above. I think you've done a fantastic job of sourcing her other works and like that you add the previous sentence and the new information you want to add on to it; it makes your edits easy to read. I would agree with the comment that if there are any more awards, that would be interesting to include. The Metchie link also isn't working for me. Cerebro científico (talk) 18:09, 1 March 2020 (UTC)