User talk:Tbulow

Sales strategy
Hi Thomas, thanks for message. I deleted your article because
 * it did not provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. The topic may well be notable, but in the absence of good, independent references, it reads like a personal reflection, essay or original research
 * it was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. Examples of unsourced claims presented as fact include: such as CRM systems from SalesForce and SAP helps with keeping track of all transactional information about customers and prospects and new generation tools from companies such as ARPEDIO Solutions supports the development of specific customer sales strategies. The companies concerned are not acceptable references for opinions about their products. Furthermore, there should be no url links in the text (only References and External links sections), least of all to commercial companies.

If you want to try to address these problems, I can post the deleted text in a user sandbox where you can work on it before reposting. Just let me know  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  13:38, 20 August 2013 (UTC)


 * If you follow the link above, it will tell you what counts as reliable sources. Text books, journals, credible web pages and the like are fine. Blogs and web pages which are unattributable or where the author is not an obvious specialist are not. I'll post the text here shortly  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  13:53, 20 August 2013 (UTC)