User talk:Tceg49/sandbox

Comments on Bibliography
Tori: This is good but you are potentially missing some relevant primary literature from the spreadsheet such as Sikes, Pearson, Muiznieks, and Mengak. One of these (Sikes) was your own contribution to the list. In fact, it appears to be your only contribution to the list.Njclum (talk) 02:43, 20 November 2016 (UTC)

Comments on Rough Draft
Tori: You've done a good job of outlining the basics of reproduction, but you haven't covered all the points listed in your outline. In particular, there is little information on the mating process. These are solitary animals, so how are they finding each other, and who goes looking for who? How long do they stay together? Do females mate with more than one male? Do they mate with the same male in different cycles? Also, don't forget to reference your information.Njclum (talk) 02:56, 12 December 2016 (UTC)