User talk:Tchan12

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Hi. In your your sandbox you wrote

Wikipedia articles aren't supposed to give advice or try to convince their readers of any particular point of view. The information isn't bad, but it needs to be presented differently. For example (assuming that there are sources to back it up) you might say something more like Make sure that you are simply talking about what reliable sources have said, not advising your readers how to proceed. You shouldn't be speaking to your readers too directly. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:34, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
 * It's easier to maintain current weight than to lose way[says source X]
 * [These named sources or experts] recommend intervening to manage weight[source]