User talk:Tcharlotte/sandbox

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Nice work. A few things you could do to improve your draft
 * You need to convert to properly-formatted inline citations. If you aren’t sure how to do this, please revisit the section of the training module beginning on this page.
 * You need to add links to other Wikipedia articles. Topics and terms that are likely to be unfamiliar to the average reader should be linked the first time they appear in the article.
 * When you copied these section headers into your draft, it appears that you copied them without first clicking on the edit button. As a result you have things like "Contents [hide]" and "[edit source]" in your section headers. Please clean up these artifacts. When you move your work back into mainspace, make sure you click on the "edit" button first. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:13, 27 April 2018 (UTC)