User talk:Tcharwood73/sandbox

This could be a separate entry by itself rather than a sub-section within the 'poverty' page (which is already too long).

Poverty and health outcomes introduction – ‘non-poverty' peers is not grammatically accurate, you mean ‘non-poor' peers.

Under Poverty and Mental health – source the term ‘poverty distress’. The link between anxiety, depression and schizophrenia and poverty also needs citations, and more than only Kuruvilla and Jacob. Are these caused by poverty or does poverty make treatment harder due to lack of resources? Are there studies exploring causality? You mention the reciprocal relationship but economic studies measuring this causality in health would be useful.

Under Healthcare section: ‘Access to Medicaid for low-income adults aided in diagnosis of metabolic disease, saw a reduction in diagnosis of mental health disorders, and reduced incurrence of “catastrophic medical costs” by patients dramatically.’ This sentence needs a source. Sramnarain (talk) 22:01, 2 November 2019 (UTC)sramnarain

Peer Review
I enjoyed reading your article and I think the psychiatric implications of poverty is something that definitely deserves more attention than it gets. The drift hypothesis was very interesting. I think you should spend more time discussing that maybe in a subsection of its own. You have a good range of reliable sources, but it seems like you might have a little bias towards the correlation between poverty and health outcomes just because it is the topic you're explaining. Maybe add a section referencing a new article or too that criticizes the correlation if you can find one just to ensure you include the full scope of the debate around it. Otherwise good job I like your article and it's well written.

AlexAlex Horley (talk) 17:43, 6 November 2019 (UTC)