User talk:Tcwgswiki/sandbox

Peer Editing by Emily Murphy
Taylor! your draft looks good so far. When reading it I was trying to think of things that could help you improve for the best possible article in the end. I think I would try and add information for people who don't already know what hipster sexism is. This is because I still left reading it confused on what it truly was. I think you should also work on making it more flowing so that one heading on this topic can lead into another one for kind of a flow and clearer understanding. I also noticed that you should add citations after each sentence of research that has been added into this article! I would add names of people involved in hipster sexism or people who have a deep connection to allow people that are into this topic to really grasp it, you could also add more information on what people face and feel from hipster sexism, results form it, and what forms it comes most popular in! so Far it looks really good, I would keep researching more information for the clearest possible understanding and work on those credible sources!!(Egmurphyy (talk) 19:50, 17 April 2018 (UTC))

Candace Soto Peer Response
Good stuff so far, Taylor! I know your struggling to find some more information on Hipster Sexism so I went on the TCU Library Database and it had a lot of good scholarly and peer-reviewed work and I think that could definitely help you "beef" up on some of the information you have already! Also I think it would be interesting to know who was behind the idea of giving all these women who worked for Thinx a 2-week maternal leave. Otherwise you have great content! Keep up the good work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Candacesoto (talk • contribs) 22:35, 17 April 2018 (UTC)