User talk:Tdaniels38/Neoarchean

Elliana's Peer Review
Lead Section

I think your lead section does its job perfectly- it gives a good overall picture of what I'm about to read in your article. It provides a good historical background and shows why this era is important. The only immediate thing that I see that can be improved is to reword the part about the time span, because I initially misconstrued it to mean the time span of the Archean eon instead. Overall though, I think it's great and to the point.

Structure

I would move the last sentence of the first paragraph to after the first sentence or reword it, since it seems a little bit off right after discussing the validity of Kenorland. Otherwise, your structure seems great and I think it flows really well. Everything seems to be in chronological order and backed by previous statements.

Balance of Coverage

I think there is a great balance of coverage in this draft. It does well in covering the most important aspects of continental formation in the Neoarchean era, as well as not focusing too much on the minor parts. You also present the elements that are under scientific debate with neutrality and fairness. I think you do well in presenting different perspectives, especially in an area that doesn't have a ton of perspectives.

Neutral Content

As I said previously, I think you did a great job providing neutral content. I can't find a place in the article where you display a positive or negative viewpoint. Your wording seems completely neutral and doesn't show any prevailing opinions on the topic, or anything really.

Sources

All of your sources are from scientific journals and they seem to be reliable, so I think your information is pretty trustworthy. There are a lot of quotes from your second source, so I would consider balancing it out a little more. At the same time though, that source seems to be the most applicable to your topic, so I think your judgement would be best in this case. Overall, your sources seem well-rounded and non-biased!

Eheb03 (talk) 02:16, 13 November 2021 (UTC)