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Tddang14 Review
Lead section is straight forward and gives the reader insight into an important environmental law already in place. The content in the body paragraphs is good and I like the way you tied in together two different projects. I would suggest finding other articles regarding the two mentioned projects that give an insight as to what exactly they are doing in those projects or possibly get some statistics of what the outcome will be once the projects are finished. The sources look credible. Although I was unable to locate source one, it does seem like a credible article being that it’s from the National Assembly of Laos.

== Thank you for the feedback! There is a lot of data in some of the sources that I cited that I just have not included in my draft yet. I took your advice and found a fact sheet regarding information about the 2nd NGO project that I briefly mentioned before. Tddang14 (talk) 06:21, 26 October 2018 (UTC) ==