User talk:Tdean1234

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Lewy body dementia
Hi, Tdean1234. I am copying to here a message that I left for Hvonruden13 several days ago and to which I have received no response:  I have replaced your edit for several reasons. First, you used a primary source when multiple secondary reviews are available. Second, the numbers are not that clear; everyone says something slightly different. Third, you added content that is not stricly Epidemiology (see Wikipedia's medical manual of style) and that is repeated information that is more correctly covered in other articles. ; perhaps you can help get some attention from this course, as LBD is a frequent target of edits that belong better at DLB or PDD. Regards, Sandy Georgia (Talk)  15:18, 12 November 2020 (UTC) Hello SandyGeorgia, Thank you for your help and suggestions. Sorry for the late response, but I did read your message. I hope I took into consideration what you said and made the right corrections. I hope you like our article now that it is complete. Thank you again for your help!