User talk:Teacher1975

Sin
Hi Teacher1975. I have reverted your edit to Sin again and I thought it only fair to explain why. The problem is partially one of tone but also that it reads as a confusing non-sequitur to insert it where you have done. You can't use the concept of original sin, which is specific to Christianity, as a lead in to explaining that the Christian view is similar to the Jewish one. I am not adverse to a brief mention of original sin at the end of that paragraph instead, if it can be phrased in a way that will be easily understood. Remember, we don't want much detail here because this is only meant to be a very basic overview of the Christian idea of sin. There is much more detail in the main article on that subject, Christian views of sin, which includes original sin. We also have an article purely about original sin. --DanielRigal (talk) 22:56, 23 October 2009 (UTC)