User talk:Teaghanf12/Undertreatment of pain

Prof Feedback
--Liliput000 (talk) 16:16, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
 * I want to preface my feedback by saying that you are making very important contributions and have found solid sources! the work is now more on style, paraphrasing, rhetorical contextualizing, organizing your content
 * because I have some pretty significant comments I will be doing in-line comments in the googledoc (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EUCq_IcmN2jDyehOrg08VdQ0_fXO8Gw8QtQux5SW9yg/edit#)
 * A comment on sources -- I don't see you using all of the ones you noted in the googledoc so if you are able to include info from these, it will certainly strengthen your contribution
 * A comment on peer review -- it looks like Velen and Nesreen commented on the existing content -- not super useful but still useful in thinking about whether you want to address the items they point out.