User talk:TeamIsotopes

Welcome!
Hello, TeamIsotopes, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Elysia and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Re-introduction!
Hi, TeamIsotopes! I just read through your article on Anat Shahar. I really enjoyed it! I especially like how you featured a person with a scientific background I find interesting, and made the article neutral-but-relatable to me as a reader. Well done! The sentence structure is balanced, the profile a good start.

If I had to improve one thing, it would be the verb tenses, which shift from past to present to future, sometimes inside of a single section. Perhaps take a look at someone like Marie Curie or Donna Blackmond's pages to see how these differ. I'd also like to see an expansion of exactly WHICH high-temp materials are used, and how the isotope studies are performed.

Nice going! Tarselli (talk) 23:07, 10 November 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tarselli (talk • contribs)

Interested in DYK?
Have you created a new article in the past 7 days, or substantially improved an existing one? Did you discover a really cool and interesting fact that you want to share with the world? You may be able to create a Did you know for Wikipedia's front page! If you're interested, let me know! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:15, 5 December 2018 (UTC)