User talk:TeamIsotopes/

Hi, TeamIsotopes! I just read through your article on Anat Shahar. I really enjoyed it! I especially like how you featured a person with a scientific background I find interesting, and made the article neutral-but-relatable to me as a reader. Well done! The sentence structure is balanced, the profile a good start.

If I had to improve one thing, it would be the verb tenses, which shift from past to present to future, sometimes inside of a single section. Perhaps take a look at someone like Marie Curie or Donna Blackmond's pages to see how these differ. I'd also like to see an expansion of exactly WHICH high-temp materials are used, and how the isotope studies are performed.

Nice going! Tarselli (talk) 23:07, 10 November 2018 (UTC)