User talk:TechPersonUS

Article: Vraj Shroff
@TheWikiholic, Hi - thanks for reviewing my draft! Can you provide more context why you believe my submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article? I added 28 references - a majority of them are independent of the subject, dedicate significant coverage to the subject, and have extremely high credibility.

Example 1: Reference #3 from the 34th Street Magazine Example 2: Reference #5 from the District Education Board 219 Example 3: All PennToday sources Example 4: All The Daily Pennsylvanian sources Example 5: The official page of UPenn's computer science department

Considering he is the founder of Magic Connects, a widely used student platform, I believe he qualifies for a Wikipedia article. Please let me know if you have any ideas about improving the article.

TechPersonUS (talk) 06:31, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vraj Shroff (May 17)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheWikiholic was:

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TheWikiholic (talk) 05:58, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vraj Shroff (May 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Nomadicghumakkad was:

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Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 17:45, 21 May 2021 (UTC)

Vraj Shroff moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Vraj Shroff, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) In addition there is a question regarding WP:UPE or WP:COI. Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, and have addressed the UPE/COI issue, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Do not move the article into mainspace yourself. Onel 5969  TT me 12:46, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vraj Shroff (July 31)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheBirdsShedTears was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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TheBirdsShedTears (talk) 06:23, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of Vraj Shroff


The article Vraj Shroff has been proposed for deletion&#32;because of the following concern: "Does not meet WP:GNG or WP:BIO notability criteria. Sources are either passing mention or are affiliated with article subject's alma mater. Article also makes several major claims without sources (such as subject being 'awarded' from US Army and US Navy). Article was previously declined multiple times at AFC for lack of reliable sources showing significant coverage, no significant major changes were made after last AFC decline."

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Please consider improving the page to address the issues raised. Removing will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. RA 0808 talkcontribs 02:17, 26 December 2021 (UTC)