User talk:Teddybear232323/Treatments for PTSD

Peer review for "Treatments for PTSD" 1. In "Psychotherapy" under the "Cognitive Behavioral Therapy" sub-header the phrase "there is a high strength of evidence that together they can.." is awkwardly phrased. Consider rephrasing as "there is significant evidence that together they can..." instead. 2. In "Psychotherapy" under the "Cognitive Behavioral Therapy" sub-header the phrase "lead to a loss of PTSD diagnosis" is not correct (at least according to my knowledge of the literature). Instead, consider removing that phrase and just having "...reduce PTSD symptoms and depressive symptoms." 3. If I'm not mistaken, cognitive therapy is a subset of CBT. Do some research into that before changing anything but most of the descriptions of the cognitive therapy are very similar to CBT. 4. Add more info under the "relaxation techniques" section. Consider adding how the relaxation is done, typical relaxation techniques used, etc. 5. The last four therapies under "psychotherapy" need more. See note 4. 6. Citation 9, 21, 29, 31, 34, 37, 38, 42, 43, 44, 45, 52, 53 and 67 are a tad bit out of date. Consider searching for alternate citations that still provide support for each fact that are updated. Just in case anything has changed since then.SkyM99 (talk) 23:47, 28 February 2021 (UTC)Sky