User talk:Teek28/sandbox

I really like your article and to be honest the only problem I had with it is your sources and their set up. I think you need maybe some more sources and they should be set up properly with a reference list at the bottom. This is fairly easy to do you'd just have to look at the instructions for it. That way the number will just be in the article and it will link with whatever reference at the bottom.

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Hi,

Just a couple of suggestions to help improve your article technically. First, that you cite your sources so that Wikipedia and other users can reference check your work which will prevent the article from being removed. Also that it follows the citation format that Wikipedia lays out in its tutorial section. Secondly, that you remove any exclamation marks within your piece so that it sounds like an informative article rather than a personal blog. Either than that great work, and it's definitely a jumping off point for others to add to the topic. Tkala808 (talk) 23:54, 22 November 2013 (UTC)tkala808